I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Graeme. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Toa I dont understand your work. But It looks interesting and I think you could tell us a bit more about your circle. I think that is what it is And keep up the good work from Karere at Ahipara school.
Hi, my name is Rollin. I like your post about earth and what belongs inside of it. Maybe next time add more description about this earth post. Other than that, good job!
Talofa Toa, I really like how you have done a drawing on earth and the inside of it but next time could you add more description. other than that great job.
Hi Toa, im Diaz from ahipara school. I don't really understand your work about the inside of the earth and maybe next time you could add more detail but it does look very interesting. Keep up the good work!
Hi Toa, Ngairon here from Ahipara school. I really like your DLO about the inside of the earth. Maybe next time you could add a WALT saying what you were learning to do and a blurb for what the task was. Ka Pai!
Hi Toa I dont understand your work. But It looks interesting and I think you could tell us a bit more about your circle. I think that is what it is And keep up the good work from Karere at Ahipara school.
ReplyDeleteHi Toa interesting work of inside of the earth. Next time could you maybe make your work larger. Keep up your fantastic work. From Roman
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ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Rollin. I like your post about earth and what belongs inside of it. Maybe next time add more description about this earth post. Other than that, good job!
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ReplyDeleteI really like how you have done a drawing on earth and the inside of it but next time could you add more description. other than that great job.
Hi Toa, im Diaz from ahipara school. I don't really understand your work about the inside of the earth and maybe next time you could add more detail but it does look very interesting. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Toa, Ngairon here from Ahipara school. I really like your DLO about the inside of the earth. Maybe next time you could add a WALT saying what you were learning to do and a blurb for what the task was. Ka Pai!
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